Avec Patreon c'est à cause des hackers et des comptes miroir. (faux créateurs voleurs de copyright) - et aussi des abus sur les cartes bancaires des utilisateurs.
Et F95zone c'est à cause de la quantité des haineurs et racistes (avant tout inhumains) qui sont là que pour uniquement causer des problèmes. (surtout envers les personnes LGBTQAI+) - qui sommes rabaissés a un plus bas niveau que les ordures des "favelas", et puis nous sommes signalés sans nulle raison et donc injustement, et les administrateurs du site ne se donnent pas la peine de même pas regarder si ces individus disent vrai ou pas.
Et pour nous les réels professionnels (dans l'audiovisuel et dans le gaming) ça nous pose énormément des problèmes. (surtout que c'est très dangereux pour notre travail)
Le pire problème dans ces plateformes c'est le fait qu'il n'y à aucun respect pour autrui. - j'ai déjà éduqué et donc élevé mes propres 4 fils et ma fille qui sont maintenant des adultes responsables et parents a leur tour, et ça m'aura suffit, je n'ai pas a le faire avec les enfants des autres.
Everything is so good. Keep up the good work. Made my life move to another world for a period of time, it was so exciting, the story is superb as it progress. I so love it, everything is so good. Now let me share this wonder to the world.
Erwin, I was looking at your Patreon and some of the content says it is "locked" by T2 and T3, yet I only see an option for T1 supporter membership. I'm a bit confused.
He wrote he'll suspend that option for few weeks cause he is absent, and doesn't want people to feel robbed. I'm in the same boat... I wanted to get my hands on the dev version as soon as I finished the public playthrough but nope. Gotta wait :D
The story is absolutely beautifully written! And the vibe and aesthetic are just... idk how you are able to create this in a chill but still amazingly arousing way. Can't wait to see what comes next!
Tell me dear sir ... (LOL) - I saw (and therefore clearly noticed) in this last update that you have downright images of another game in the genre that is also quite so fabulous, magnificent, exciting (oops, I mean, interesting ) ...? It is a huge praise to its creator with certainty! It's crazy your evolution! - your game-novel is becoming absolutely magnificent, especially since a lot of us can identify with the main character thanks to the main theme and the story. I hug you strongly. Take good care of yourself. LOVES John
Tu fais un travail de génie, tu es définitivement un jeune homme très talentueux.
super hot game!! I can't wait for future updates :) Also there should definitely be a storyline with the uncle hehe and maybe a gallery in the title page?
Congrats, mate! The intro to all characters psi and story ambience is great, and the graphics are realistic and really hot!
Sometimes I don't get how the choices impact the story or if they do it at all (wine yes or no?), but it happens to me often at visual novels. The author's mind is difficult to read! ;-)
Some choices will have impact on the story, other, no, just scenes change but it's a part of the psi and ambiance ;)
As I said, I'm not developping all the routes at the same time, would be too long, I focus on 1 path... but I open some options for the future as well :) And we can't always understand everything, why his shirt is blue and not black, well... it's how the life is :) We don't always take rational decision with purpose, and sometimes yes ^^
I leave you here a small copy and paste of my new commentary on the space of the game-novel "Bound By Night":
Definitely, with "Summer Vacation" are among the best game-novels that I have played / that I have known. - with the young Erwin (the creator of this other game-novel) you make me proud to be part of the old gamer generation and also gay.
Once again, I thank you from the bottom of my heart for this such intense pleasure.
You really do honor to our small community, which despite everything remains as strong and united.
I am definitely completely in love with your game-novel.
Our character and the cousin would really make a very beautiful couple. - however ... Whether it is the cousin and / or the uncle ... Geez ... I would have gladly f ... Uh ... Feel... (okay, bad choice of words...) Work a close relationship of course! LOL
(I've been playing this version of your game that you just posted a few hours ago at least twice now)
I tried the new version. Really great job, man! Now I would like to have a Fabien all to myself haha. You're doing really well and I enjoyed the various choices with different scenes. I tried as many as I could, I hope I didn't miss any. Can't wait for the next update.
Thanks! Well, the friend will arrive soon... ^_^ maybe in the next update, or the one after, not yet decided... but definitely on the road ^^ (I'm currently considering opening a poll on patreon / discord to let people chose "the good one" ;))
A very promising coming-of-age story. It was fun and endearing, so very well done.
In terms of feedback, I agree with some others comments. Some facial expressions were kinda weird, but they weren't as many to be a problem. But, let's be honest, we people something make weird faces, so, ironically, it feels natural, organic, more so, since you're portraing an awkard young adult discovering his sexuality and himself. So, I think that, as long as doesn't affect any key moments of the story, is not that big deal.
Some sentences and expressions need some corrections, because can slow a little the pacing of the story when you are reading it. But, again, since is not your first language (mine neither, so take this part of the review with a grain of salt because I'm on the same page like you, haha), the overall work is very well executed. So, a minor fix here and there and thats all.
The characters are charismatic and sexy, and the dialogues are good. I would like, anyway, read a little bit more to have a bigger picture, but so far, so good.
The context, the enviroment of the story, this fancy house in the middle of nowhere during holidays, is a very good way to create an ambiente of closeness and intimacy (and also, for crazy things to happen, haha). I really like it (I want a house like that, to be honest)
In terms of ideas, I think it would be nice to read about Silvia, the aunt. Not now, anyway, but in the future. I know its a gay game, and the expectations can be others, but you're telling a story, so that's the reason why I think (at least a little) it would be nice to have content of her and her story.
But, if we talk about the spicy stuff, I have 2 primary ideas:
1- Since they sleep together, a lot things can happen overnight (like waking up with one hugging the other; for more fun and akward situations, Fabien should be the one doing this)
2- The family has a gym, so I think a muscle worship scene would be just fine. Maybe the Uncle can be the one encouraging Mathew to touching him and so (he's has such a big lewd aura, haha)
So, that's all. I hope my review help you in any way. Hugs and good luck with this amazing project.
Thanks for your feedback. I have to admit I wasn't a lot about describing more Silvia, excepted some clues from Fabien when he speaks about his mother but I will see what I can do to get more context around this family.
For the spicies, indeed the gym is definitely there for something, I have many ideas... (too much lol), I add you idea on this, I didn't imagine the uncle at this place... but why not ;)
And yeah, they sleep together, so much things can happen...
After all, it's summer, so you don't even need an excuse for that, haha.
I think it would be fun and hot if they ask you to touch their bodies and the more you do it, the more clothes they ask you to take off them, haha.So much potential, I love this
I admit that my thoughts were quite similar to yours, but as in the description of his game-novel and his presentation it specifies certain things, including the fact that English is not his native language, and that in addition it is his first work in this field ...
It will have kept me simple, without going into too many details. (That besides for the moment he can take them for superfluous.)
He's only just getting started for now, and he's young. - over time he will understand and feel for himself what he has in his heart to share, and then improve himself.
He seems to be very talented, let's give him time to learn and move forward at his own pace in this universe/area. - we all know very well that it is the best thing.
We must not forget that the main thing is to put his passion into what he does.
Obviously, the tips don't hurt. - but let's take it easy with him. Don't scare him too much from the start, it can have the opposite effect, and it stops him right away.
I completly agree with you in everything you said. I tried to use the most polite words I could write to not be harsh with my thoughts. I tried to be everything but harsh, but yeah, maybe give him such a big text so early on development, can be seen as a little to much, hahaha. He is putting effort, love and passion in this work and it shows. And I know that, as time passes, this VN will become incredible.
With that being said, I gave my feedback because, as a fellow writer that I am, I know that sometimes, some expressions or ideas I use (in my native language or in english), can look good, but then, when I put my work out there for people to read, it may be a little confusing. And its even harder when you try to translate it. Its a mess sometimes, hahaha.
Noting bad or outerly wrong in his writing, as I stated in my feedback, just some minor fixes to make everything smooth and to be as much inmerssive as it can be. I gave my point of view more of as the type of feedback my friends give me with my writing than from a critic, I think, but yeah, I recorgnice what you tell me and I also aprecciate your feedback to my feeeback, haha.
(I make a separate message, then I talk about something completely different ...)
You put all your post translated into French ... - would you be French ...? If so, don't hesitate if you ever need help with anything relating to the translation, or even anything else, I would be happy to help in what I can.
Besides, since apparently you're still a very young talent, don't always pay too much attention to comments, then sometimes there are people who are very harsh and cruel with their words. (looking at this from another angle, it will also allow you to forge strength and resistance regarding the world of gaming, which sometimes can be ruthless)
Thanks. Yes, I'm french. The game will be translated into french a well, but I wanted to make the english first since the community is larger (it's sometimes challenging to say in english what I would like in french, so, I adapt more than I translate haha)
Oui, j'ai des racines Françaises. Je parle couramment le Français tel que l'Anglais et la langue Portugaise. (et j'ai quelques connaissances dans les autres langues latines, et l'ancien/littéraire Latin lui même)
D'ailleurs je suis coincé dans mes bureaux à Paris depuis le début de cette espèce de "plague" de virus, en lieu d'être à la maison a Lisbonne... - mais bon, cela n'a aucun rapport ici...
Even if it's very short ... - it's a very promising game-novel ...
And I am completely on the charm of this handsome cousin (the perfect "husband"! - well, the uncle is also very handsome, even absolutely perfect, especially physically speaking ... What a man!)
I wouldn't say no to a "scorching" or "intensely passionate" moment with the two of them, it would be a pure dream ...
I think I fell completely in love with these two absolutely perfect males there ...
I can't wait to see the rest of this exciting game-novel ...
I hope that the continuation will come soon ... - so far I am very surprised by the quality.
Professionally speaking, it's also a very good job.
Hello, thanks for your comment! Yeah, I wanted Fabien to be... attractive... as the uncle ;) Everything is possible for future scene, I keep it in mind.
Sorry for the "short", but actually I wanted to see if this story / style could please people before going further, and it's kind of a motivation to have people behind you, metaphorically speaking ;-)
I hope being able to release the next chapter soon, I have to find the rythm as well, I don't think relevant to just update it when a scene is over, I would like something more consistent, maybe a release when a day ingame is over ? i will try and will see the reactions and comments as well, as your feedbacks are really important for me :)
It looks very interesting and pretty, the narrative timing is right and the scenes very good. Maybe occasionally some strange expression, but I know it's a problem with the graphics engine (I know a little bit). I await the next chapter, the game promises well!
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Uncle Steve is HOT. I can't wait to see more of him with Matthieu
Uncle fan I see :)
Définitivement, je suis vraiment complétement amoureux de ton travail, et de ce Novel.
Definitely, I am really completely in love with your work, and this Novel.
J'ai quitté définitivement Patreon et aussi F95zone...
C'est juste pour t'avertir... - puis je n'ai vraiment plus l'intention d'y revenir dessous.
Des trois sites, Itchio est le seul où je me sens encore un minimum en sécurité.
(PS: Je te conseillerai de bloquer ces comptes là dés que tu pourras. Puis il se passe encore des étranges choses sur ces sites.)
du genre? c'est quoi le pb sur ces sites? Développe ça m'intrigue
Avec Patreon c'est à cause des hackers et des comptes miroir. (faux créateurs voleurs de copyright) - et aussi des abus sur les cartes bancaires des utilisateurs.
Et F95zone c'est à cause de la quantité des haineurs et racistes (avant tout inhumains) qui sont là que pour uniquement causer des problèmes. (surtout envers les personnes LGBTQAI+) - qui sommes rabaissés a un plus bas niveau que les ordures des "favelas", et puis nous sommes signalés sans nulle raison et donc injustement, et les administrateurs du site ne se donnent pas la peine de même pas regarder si ces individus disent vrai ou pas.
Et pour nous les réels professionnels (dans l'audiovisuel et dans le gaming) ça nous pose énormément des problèmes. (surtout que c'est très dangereux pour notre travail)
Le pire problème dans ces plateformes c'est le fait qu'il n'y à aucun respect pour autrui. - j'ai déjà éduqué et donc élevé mes propres 4 fils et ma fille qui sont maintenant des adultes responsables et parents a leur tour, et ça m'aura suffit, je n'ai pas a le faire avec les enfants des autres.
when is the next update?
Really soon :) I plan a dev update in the next days, as a Public version :)
And finally it has been done today !
ohmaygod, i jump out of excitement ty so much
This game is amazing!
Everything is so good. Keep up the good work. Made my life move to another world for a period of time, it was so exciting, the story is superb as it progress. I so love it, everything is so good. Now let me share this wonder to the world.
i wish next update come soon... im so damn want play with the uncle guy in the woods...
yas im obsessed
This is soo good, I love it!
IT WAS SO GOOD !!!!!! I'M OBSESSED
The plot is the best and it actually make sense . My favorite story plot EVER 💖
Graphics, story, characters, you name it... Everything in this game is amazing!
OMG I loved the game !!! Can't wait to have more !!! Awesome story and sex scenes !!
Erwin, I was looking at your Patreon and some of the content says it is "locked" by T2 and T3, yet I only see an option for T1 supporter membership. I'm a bit confused.
He wrote he'll suspend that option for few weeks cause he is absent, and doesn't want people to feel robbed. I'm in the same boat... I wanted to get my hands on the dev version as soon as I finished the public playthrough but nope. Gotta wait :D
Leaving this comment as a reminder to pay you. I'm having some trouble with paypal <3
The story is absolutely beautifully written! And the vibe and aesthetic are just... idk how you are able to create this in a chill but still amazingly arousing way. Can't wait to see what comes next!
When the uncle puts his hand on the MC's thigh, I just swooned.
I love how chill all the characters are, and I want that pool.
Tell me dear sir ... (LOL)
- I saw (and therefore clearly noticed) in this last update that you have downright images of another game in the genre that is also quite so fabulous, magnificent, exciting (oops, I mean, interesting ) ...? It is a huge praise to its creator with certainty!
It's crazy your evolution! - your game-novel is becoming absolutely magnificent, especially since a lot of us can identify with the main character thanks to the main theme and the story.
I hug you strongly.
Take good care of yourself.
LOVES
John
Tu fais un travail de génie, tu es définitivement un jeune homme très talentueux.
Daz, Blender, Photoshop :)
super hot game!! I can't wait for future updates :) Also there should definitely be a storyline with the uncle hehe and maybe a gallery in the title page?
Hello hehe, thanks. Yes I'm thinking about having a gallery :) in my todo ^^
OMG please, do a sequence of the game... Have no words to say how i enjoy and love it... Need mooooore of it
Thanks :) Really glad that you like it ;)
Congrats, mate! The intro to all characters psi and story ambience is great, and the graphics are realistic and really hot!
Sometimes I don't get how the choices impact the story or if they do it at all (wine yes or no?), but it happens to me often at visual novels. The author's mind is difficult to read! ;-)
Anyways, keep up the good job!
Hello, thanks!
Some choices will have impact on the story, other, no, just scenes change but it's a part of the psi and ambiance ;)
As I said, I'm not developping all the routes at the same time, would be too long, I focus on 1 path... but I open some options for the future as well :) And we can't always understand everything, why his shirt is blue and not black, well... it's how the life is :) We don't always take rational decision with purpose, and sometimes yes ^^
Oohmy god! I love the game, it's one of the best that I played lately, can't wait for more updates!!!
Q: Is it going to have a route with the uncle???
Thank you :)
Oh that... only God knows :D
That answer... Erwin, you diabolical...
hahah :)
Good to meet someone else that is in the same boat as me, haha.
Hi, once again love ur work! I just wanted to know how long would be the time between the updates, Every 15 days? (2 weeks?)
Hello :)
There is an update (dev version) from 7-10 days for patreons. And a public version every 2 to 3 weeks (depending on my own worload of course :)).
I just loved the game, cant wait for more updates!!
Hehe thank you! Work ongoing :)
I leave you here a small copy and paste of my new commentary on the space of the game-novel "Bound By Night":
Definitely, with "Summer Vacation" are among the best game-novels that I have played / that I have known. - with the young Erwin (the creator of this other game-novel) you make me proud to be part of the old gamer generation and also gay.
Once again, I thank you from the bottom of my heart for this such intense pleasure.
You really do honor to our small community, which despite everything remains as strong and united.
When is the next update?
Hello, I've made the last update yesterday, so next public release in 2/3 weeks :)
I am definitely completely in love with your game-novel.
Our character and the cousin would really make a very beautiful couple. - however ... Whether it is the cousin and / or the uncle ... Geez ... I would have gladly f ... Uh ... Feel... (okay, bad choice of words...) Work a close relationship of course! LOL
(I've been playing this version of your game that you just posted a few hours ago at least twice now)
Hello John, thanks again for your message, happy you're... happy with this new update^^
Yes, work a close relationship :p It's the most important thing to do!
I tried the new version. Really great job, man! Now I would like to have a Fabien all to myself haha. You're doing really well and I enjoyed the various choices with different scenes. I tried as many as I could, I hope I didn't miss any. Can't wait for the next update.
Thanks Azaza91! :) Glad you're happy with the update^^
Will there be a Android version
I'm looking at it
Amazing game, plz keep going, this is gonna be a great vn
thanks ;)
I loved it! Keeping coming, i would love to play hours of this.
PS: Im looking forward to meet the "friend" of his cousin
Thanks! Well, the friend will arrive soon... ^_^ maybe in the next update, or the one after, not yet decided... but definitely on the road ^^ (I'm currently considering opening a poll on patreon / discord to let people chose "the good one" ;))
amazing game! i loved the models and story. i just hope we get to see more of the uncle as well ;)
hello, thanks ! Well, we surely will at some point:)
wow! i Love so much the game. Good job!!
Thanks! Next chapter to come in the coming week:)
You have good taste to create hot boys (nose blood).
Hahaha, happy you enjoyed the characters ;)
A very promising coming-of-age story. It was fun and endearing, so very well done.
In terms of feedback, I agree with some others comments. Some facial expressions were kinda weird, but they weren't as many to be a problem. But, let's be honest, we people something make weird faces, so, ironically, it feels natural, organic, more so, since you're portraing an awkard young adult discovering his sexuality and himself. So, I think that, as long as doesn't affect any key moments of the story, is not that big deal.
Some sentences and expressions need some corrections, because can slow a little the pacing of the story when you are reading it. But, again, since is not your first language (mine neither, so take this part of the review with a grain of salt because I'm on the same page like you, haha), the overall work is very well executed. So, a minor fix here and there and thats all.
The characters are charismatic and sexy, and the dialogues are good. I would like, anyway, read a little bit more to have a bigger picture, but so far, so good.
The context, the enviroment of the story, this fancy house in the middle of nowhere during holidays, is a very good way to create an ambiente of closeness and intimacy (and also, for crazy things to happen, haha). I really like it (I want a house like that, to be honest)
In terms of ideas, I think it would be nice to read about Silvia, the aunt. Not now, anyway, but in the future. I know its a gay game, and the expectations can be others, but you're telling a story, so that's the reason why I think (at least a little) it would be nice to have content of her and her story.
But, if we talk about the spicy stuff, I have 2 primary ideas:
1- Since they sleep together, a lot things can happen overnight (like waking up with one hugging the other; for more fun and akward situations, Fabien should be the one doing this)
2- The family has a gym, so I think a muscle worship scene would be just fine. Maybe the Uncle can be the one encouraging Mathew to touching him and so (he's has such a big lewd aura, haha)
So, that's all. I hope my review help you in any way. Hugs and good luck with this amazing project.
Hello,
Thanks for your feedback. I have to admit I wasn't a lot about describing more Silvia, excepted some clues from Fabien when he speaks about his mother but I will see what I can do to get more context around this family.
For the spicies, indeed the gym is definitely there for something, I have many ideas... (too much lol), I add you idea on this, I didn't imagine the uncle at this place... but why not ;)
And yeah, they sleep together, so much things can happen...
Thanks again!!!
Oh yes, please think of an excuse to workout them without clothes (maybe they feel hot haha)
Haha, maybe a route to come! lol
After all, it's summer, so you don't even need an excuse for that, haha.
I think it would be fun and hot if they ask you to touch their bodies and the more you do it, the more clothes they ask you to take off them, haha. So much potential, I love this
You're definitely full of ideas :D :D :D
I admit that my thoughts were quite similar to yours, but as in the description of his game-novel and his presentation it specifies certain things, including the fact that English is not his native language, and that in addition it is his first work in this field ...
It will have kept me simple, without going into too many details. (That besides for the moment he can take them for superfluous.)
He's only just getting started for now, and he's young. - over time he will understand and feel for himself what he has in his heart to share, and then improve himself.
He seems to be very talented, let's give him time to learn and move forward at his own pace in this universe/area. - we all know very well that it is the best thing.
We must not forget that the main thing is to put his passion into what he does.
Obviously, the tips don't hurt. - but let's take it easy with him. Don't scare him too much from the start, it can have the opposite effect, and it stops him right away.
I completly agree with you in everything you said. I tried to use the most polite words I could write to not be harsh with my thoughts. I tried to be everything but harsh, but yeah, maybe give him such a big text so early on development, can be seen as a little to much, hahaha. He is putting effort, love and passion in this work and it shows. And I know that, as time passes, this VN will become incredible.
With that being said, I gave my feedback because, as a fellow writer that I am, I know that sometimes, some expressions or ideas I use (in my native language or in english), can look good, but then, when I put my work out there for people to read, it may be a little confusing. And its even harder when you try to translate it. Its a mess sometimes, hahaha.
Noting bad or outerly wrong in his writing, as I stated in my feedback, just some minor fixes to make everything smooth and to be as much inmerssive as it can be. I gave my point of view more of as the type of feedback my friends give me with my writing than from a critic, I think, but yeah, I recorgnice what you tell me and I also aprecciate your feedback to my feeeback, haha.
Hugs to you, man.
I take all the feedbacks, I know I have some lack in english, but open to all suggestions and ideas to improve the immersion! :-)
(I make a separate message, then I talk about something completely different ...)
You put all your post translated into French ... - would you be French ...? If so, don't hesitate if you ever need help with anything relating to the translation, or even anything else, I would be happy to help in what I can.
Besides, since apparently you're still a very young talent, don't always pay too much attention to comments, then sometimes there are people who are very harsh and cruel with their words. (looking at this from another angle, it will also allow you to forge strength and resistance regarding the world of gaming, which sometimes can be ruthless)
Thanks. Yes, I'm french. The game will be translated into french a well, but I wanted to make the english first since the community is larger (it's sometimes challenging to say in english what I would like in french, so, I adapt more than I translate haha)
You're french as well ?
Oui, j'ai des racines Françaises. Je parle couramment le Français tel que l'Anglais et la langue Portugaise. (et j'ai quelques connaissances dans les autres langues latines, et l'ancien/littéraire Latin lui même)
D'ailleurs je suis coincé dans mes bureaux à Paris depuis le début de cette espèce de "plague" de virus, en lieu d'être à la maison a Lisbonne... - mais bon, cela n'a aucun rapport ici...
Ok :) Courage ! ^^
Even if it's very short ... - it's a very promising game-novel ...
And I am completely on the charm of this handsome cousin (the perfect "husband"! - well, the uncle is also very handsome, even absolutely perfect, especially physically speaking ... What a man!)
I wouldn't say no to a "scorching" or "intensely passionate" moment with the two of them, it would be a pure dream ...
I think I fell completely in love with these two absolutely perfect males there ...
I can't wait to see the rest of this exciting game-novel ...
I hope that the continuation will come soon ... - so far I am very surprised by the quality.
Professionally speaking, it's also a very good job.
I give you a big hug.
Take good care of yourself.
LOVES
Hello, thanks for your comment! Yeah, I wanted Fabien to be... attractive... as the uncle ;) Everything is possible for future scene, I keep it in mind.
Sorry for the "short", but actually I wanted to see if this story / style could please people before going further, and it's kind of a motivation to have people behind you, metaphorically speaking ;-)
I hope being able to release the next chapter soon, I have to find the rythm as well, I don't think relevant to just update it when a scene is over, I would like something more consistent, maybe a release when a day ingame is over ? i will try and will see the reactions and comments as well, as your feedbacks are really important for me :)
You know...
"So far so good." - then for a start, it is quite rare to have such a quality of work. (which is quite impressive)
- - -
Tu sais...
"So far so good." - puis pour un début, c'est assez rare d'avoir une telle qualité de travail. (ce que c'est assez impressionant)
I like the good pictures, so, I try to make it as I like ^^ I'm currently working on the next scene after the end you saw :)
It looks very interesting and pretty, the narrative timing is right and the scenes very good. Maybe occasionally some strange expression, but I know it's a problem with the graphics engine (I know a little bit). I await the next chapter, the game promises well!
thanks ! I Yes, I need to fine tuned more the expression, quite challenging sometimes, thanks for your feedback ! :)
10/10
I love it
Thanks ! Working on the next chapter ^^